scarlet opinions: There’s blood on his teeth. It occurs to him that most people would be...
There’s blood on his teeth. It occurs to him that most people would be more concerned about that, but all Grantaire feels is a vague sort of disappointment knowing that drinking tonight is going to sting like hell. He groans plaintively and spits.
“I blame you for this.”
reblogging to a side account! this is phee! hi.
OKAY SO A) UM THIS IS GRE8888?? i love this friendship and it needs more attn and you have given it, this is fantab. below are some vague micro-editty nitpicks. assume anything i didn’t mention is splendid because it probably is, GOSH, what a good.
And Grantaire confesses himself impressed.
phrasing is just a teeny bit odd, i think you were going for “admits”? it doesn’t seem like the right verb in this particular case
It occurs to him that most people would be more concerned about that,
and occurs to him that most people would be more concerned about this.
you’re missing an “it” before the “occurs” in the last one, and I think the this/that should probably match up if you’re going for an echo!
….aND THAT’S ALL. IT’S PErf. you’re perf. blows a kiss